tell me how i can improve my bands songs

[Kylethedood]

www.unsignedbandweb.com/music/bands/5536
www.freewebs.com/kylethedood

thanx :)

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write your song when your realy mad or realy happy and don't write if you don't have any inspiration if you do that it will only be shitty.

write on impuls