I tried to cover offspring BUT....

[Johnny Birdbrook]

... i just couldn'T do the /proud/stabbern/ verse of trust in you :(

SO i did my own punk song xD

i even placed alittle hint reffering to the offspring.. nothin' big so it's not illegal, maybe someone finds it :D

hope you like it:

myspace bad quality (if it already works) it is "your sins":

www.myspace.com/johnnybirdbrook

rapidshare good quality:

http://rapidshare.de/files/39826974/Your_Sins.MP3.html


would like some feedback plz :D

i out it in this section, since it is like an offsring tribute... since i usually don't make punk music :(

[Hypodermic_89]

Pretty interesting. It's decent, sounds like underground 1983's DYI-rock. :D

[Johnny Birdbrook]

yeah thanx, whatever that means :D

(my punk knowledge's only : rancid, offspring, distillers, billy talent xD and.. yeah i guess thats pretty it^^)

[BuckyO'Hare]

That was actually kinda cool. Well done! :)

Psst! What's the hint? :D

[Johnny Birdbrook]

thank you very much :D

i just got one question on the text.. on my own teyt xD


i wanted to say like:

make out the fire that you lit up.. oder made on or whatever xD

and i put it like that:

dowse the fire you aroused.. (is that now totally crap? or is it possible to say that? or can we at least put it as the artists freedom?xD)

thanks for all the responses :)

[Johnny Birdbrook]

oh, i have to apolagize to everybody who visited my myspace page, to find some crazy punk music and just found annoying metal :(

I don't know why it didn't work at first, but it seemed to be my fault.

I no fixed it and put the song at first so nobody is going to be dissapointed anymore...

i apolagize again, i apreciate that so many of you visited my site, too bad the song wasnt up :(

it works now!!