Okay, that's WAY too many syllables to be able to be sung with the same rhythm. That's one major problem when translating English songs to German. I see some plural/singular errors and I think incorrect forms of some verbs. Lasst should be lass because verbs lose their endings when the verb is a command. Freunde should be Freunden because it's plural. Some nouns are not capitalized and nouns begin with a capital letter in German.

