Hello, these are some lyrics I wrote for my band Frostbitten Sunsets.
Undertow (Swim Away)
You carved out my heart
But I sharpened the knife
Betrayal turned into control
When you begged for...
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Hello, these are some lyrics I wrote for my band Frostbitten Sunsets.
Undertow (Swim Away)
You carved out my heart
But I sharpened the knife
Betrayal turned into control
When you begged for...
These are lyrics I wrote for my band Frostbitten Sunsets. If anyone has time, I would love feedback.
Denial
I feel the cat’s claws, digging into my tongue
When my reflection, asks who I am
I...
Shedding Schisms
Shedding skin at sunset
I succumb to my subconscious
And sell my soul to stimulate
Sullen and subdued senses
Savoring sensations, as I spiral
Into a sea of self-loathing...
Phantoms
Saw myself reflected in you
Thought I could stop my pain
By being your tourniquet
Tried so hard, to keep our cravings
From carving their way into consciousness
But they severed our...
Thanks a lot! But now I'm thinking, my lyrics sound sorta emo. I don't like this fact :/ I will try to write more positive songs in the future.
Yeah, just keep trying to expand your horizons as a...
Nine Lives
Sullen eyes, stung by the sunrise
Crestfallen lovers, under ominous skies
We lost our immortality today
Nine lives withered, and faded away
Precious memories of passion and...
You are a good lyricist.
Very nice. I like both the reflective and bitter emotions in these lyrics.
Thanks a lot, I appreciate you taking the time to read and offer feedback.
These are some lyrics I wrote for my band Frostbitten Sunsets.
Awake
As I approach the portal, between consciousness and sleep
I smell the romantic aroma of peach mango scented candles
The...
Thanks. I appreciate the feedback.
Hello, these are lyrics I wrote for my band Frostbitten Sunsets. If anyone has time I would love feedback.
1) Atrophy to Ashes
At first we could barely keep our hands off each other
But time...
These are lyrics that I wrote for my band Frostbitten Sunsets. If anyone has time, I would love feedback. Hope all is well.
-Jason
1) Kiss the Rattlesnake
The perilous path to paradise...
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- Jason
Thirteen Tigers
Walk up to the gate in the ancient wilderness
Seven cobras guard the sacred waterfall
Cross the wooden bridge to the mystic portal
Thirteen tigers guard the passage between...
Hello, these are lyrics to six songs I wrote for my band. If anyone has time, I would love feedback. Hope all is well.
- Jason
1) Heavenly Hypocrisy
To deny someone love is a cruel torture...
Hello, these are some lyrics I wrote for my band. If anyone has time, I would love feedback. Hope all is well, Jason.
Sinister Aristocrats
At what point do capitalism and corruption...