Do this sucks?
I sing and write the songs in my punkband, I just wonder if this chorus sucks.
The song is about drugs, here it comes:
"A thing like I will lie to you, A thing like I want to kill you, I live in your head you will find for the rest of your life I will poison your mind, Dont blame me it is your own falt you should haved stopped me when you had the chance, Now I your cigaretts will burn you from the inside until you are nothing else then CINDER!"
Please answer and tell me what you think!
It will continue to burn you from the inside until
you are nothing else than