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smileemptysoul44
03-22-2007, 01:46 PM
www.myspace.com/aygression
Grabbal
03-22-2007, 01:49 PM
Sorry, but that was boring.
iLikeTatorTots
03-22-2007, 02:25 PM
Constructive Criticism:

Needs... improvement. Sounds like something a 50 Cent fan would make. A lot of it sounds like you were reading and rapping off a Q-Card.

But keep working at it. Time and practice will make you better if you want it, and keep doing it.